So romantic and passionate too! Great write!! Hope to read more!!

hey that rocked!

great poem keep up the good work.i like this poem a lot i hop ethat someday we all are able to embrace someone we love like u did

WOW this is really good....keep up the great work! 5/5
xoxo,
~*Sarah*~

hey, good job. It's really good. 5/5

~no more

Thanks for the comments people!

I loved your explination and feeling put out in this poem. I can really picture this event. heh. not that i want to imagine someone else having passonate sex. but hey... thats life. lol. Really like your writting though.

-Courtney

beautiful! very detailed and well-written! great job! 5/5 keep it up!!

That was so good!!!

That was so good!!!

its sexy.nice.some lines a true for me coz that wat i feel too:)

wow i love this one. so much emotion!

damn gud...

i liek it.. very inticing ( i think that how u spell it) 5/5 gr8

keep it up. i wanna read more.

For this kind of poem it was really good! I like the way you didn't say everything straight forward but I still knew what you were describing. Very beautiful..And some of the words you used fit the purpose perfectly. I must say I really enjoyed this one! Keep writing, take care.
Satuxxa

awwwwww thats well nice ^_^

wow grt poem loved it
always smile
peaceeee

AWESOME!!!! i loved it... its actually inspired me to write my own about me and the love of my life! THANKS! keep it up!!!
much love
Amanda

This poem was so beautiful. I loved it. Your an amazing writer. Keep up the good work. xX

Love it love it love!!!!
5/5