Great poem i loved every line of it, so well written :)

Darn that 3 minute rule! I tried to give u a phat five...........so here it is (*****) I adored the last line

This is a really good poem. I could almost feel every word. Very nice

-Bryce~

wow this is magic,
i can really relate, it almost made me cry, it really struck a note with me. its very creative i loved the words you used infact i loved the whole poem awsome work
>>5/5<<
bec