Loved this. The tempo and meter of the poem was faultless, its rythmn fully appreciated if said aloud. Like a lyrical kind of music if you know what I mean. And the brevity of this piece seems to emphasize its bitter sweet theme/message.Lovely poem holly. 5

excellent..amazing...it love it..
-Mortalidaga

short and to the point. excellent. perfect rhythm, i gave it a 5. wonderful work.

awwwwww! that was really sweet!

I love the way this poem flowed and how it finishes with the same words at the begining. Very nifty

Great work, Holly.

I love the repeat of the first stanza...offers an extra bit of hope!

I love all your poems! Keep on writing them, they truly are a joy to read.