Nice such case and defence for love can make u a great man and such poem is too much great complete like this dear KEEP UP

Love this poem it was heart warmign and wel wlritten

You poem was amazing and just overall spectacular! its so different from what i normally read. its great that you can share your gift because it truly is a gift, ive only read a few things that have ever touched me as much as this did. thank you!

kayli renae

I am speechless.
Like wow... lol That was just wow...that's all I can say xD Great work!! =]

OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG
I loved this poem.
I almost cried!!!!!!!
I swear!!!!
No poem has ever made me this sad!!!!! Keep up the good work!!!!!!! I loved it!!!!!!

Qistina

Amazing. one of the best poems i have ever read. Im sure a girl would be lucky to have you:)

WHY DID THE BOYFREIND STAB THE FREIND

I really like this piece of work,particularly the twist in the middle, not where I was expecting it to go - gosh I do like a good surprise!
Well Done! Neil.

Okay,
as a narrative poem in itself I love it.
but stating that you ended her cries by initially DYING makes no sense to me.
it gives the emotion that he meant nothing to her and contradicts its integrity.

I love the emotion fluttering within your head though!

I love this poem, i wish guys were more like you. Keep up the good work, and please read some of mines you might be able to relate.

.,oh my god.,the moment i read it i feel the sadness.,soo nice..

It's interesting, I like how you start and end with the surprise ending.

It had an ending i didn't see coming.
great poem.

Omg you are so good at writing poems man was that real?? i cryed lol

Wow this is a really good poem. It kind of reminds me and my x-boyfriend. Because he used to be someone that i can talk to whenever i really needed. So heck yea you got my vote (5)!!!

Love itt!!!! ahhh so good
i actually almost cried ahha

This poem is AMAZING! it was touching.. and i totally loved it.

Love your poem!

wow,
i saw your name..
and i know someone named
tyler macdonald..
wierd.

Good work

This is what every girl dreams about a guy feeling for them....not the end though it is very heart breaking. I am a sucker for happy endings, though the unpredictable ones are great too. I hope you continue to write such poems in the future.