This poem is excellent.. I Love it.. awesome job on it.. and keep up the good work..

This is fantastic, you have a real sense of passion that you have intergrated really well into this poem, i like it very much
Sarah -xo

Awwww

soooo sweet and sad at the same time

Aw this is so cute<3
very good:)

Love love love it
it was so emotional and touching
i cried like you have some awesome
talent kid !

ThiiS Poem iiS OFFICIIAL.. iiM DiiGGiin iiT

Wow wat a great peom!!!
i just love it!!!!
it was so sad but cute that he did that for her!!!

5/5

<3 i love you silly

Omg this poem is absolutely amazing. Who ever it was written about is a very lucky girl to have someone care that much. You must be a pretty amazing guy to write something liek that. Anyway Great poem.
<3Danielle.

This is so sad but is a really good poem and i like it alot

WOW!! This poem is amazing! Ive never read anything like it. Great job!

GREAT POEM!!!!!!!!

You write amazing poems i love to read them

Woow...that was a very moving poem, filled with painstrength sadness and tragedy great work

You are a really good poet i thout i would cry

This is so sweet

That was a bomb ass poem G...

Wow. that was amazing
that remined me so much of my best friend. ii had a best friend who would always be there with me. he was there when my boyfriend cheated on me and he tried to beat him up and he had gotten shot. so this poem really touches me. and thank you so much for writing this because it really ment a lot to a lot of people. good poem tyler. keep it up hun

Wow that was a great poem and whoever that idiot was who stole your poem is dumb. but we know YOU wrote it so don't even worry

Wow very very very good poem sad but excellently written 5/5 <33

I LOVE THIS...before i joined the community, i read this poem. it motivated me to write poems..:)