This is the end of the story. Part one was How Long, Part 2 was His Nightmare. Please read those two before you read this one other wise your are gonna be lost.

im speechless. that is three amazing pieces of work. i really really enjoyed that!!

I was impressed with this poem until you started talking about ghosts. I realize that not all popems have to be real, I have a lot myself that are just stories, but it disappointed me. Oh well. You can't please all the peole all the time....

You would have reilzed it was a ghost poem if you read the first two that go along with the part. You read the ending before you read the first and the middle. I'm sorry it disapointed you.

whoa..intense...i love it
-Mortalidaga

Oooh, a perfect twist, so far I'm giving it a 10 out of 5 ^_^. -continues to part IV-

--Bryce

I really liked all three of these. They reminded me of the sixth sense. I don't know why they did, just did. I thought it was an excellent story, that you told very well through three people eyes. This was a very imaginative piece of work. I am impressed. Keep up the good writing. I love the way you tell the story.

Your poem series is great! I loved it.!