it's okay, i liekd it, but i think some of the lines could be better..no offence..jsut critizm
-Mortalidaga

Ehhh, this poem wasn't very good. The rhymes were to "cute" and singsongy.....they didn't fit the tone of the poem at all

Well..like I said..I'm not very good at that kind of poem..that's the first 'sad' poem I wrote or whatever you wanna call it..the rest are love poems pretty much