oh thanx lindsey, i didn't like it much myself, just a quick piece of work but im glad you liked it.

xxoo,
alysse

me like 2!!!!!

awwaww thanx luce. luv yah!

xxoo,
alysse

A wonderful poem!!!

oh thanx Robert! ur comments r greatly appreciated!

xxoo,
alysse

Thanx Lindsey im glad u liked i.i'd b happi 2 comment on ur poems anytime

xxoo,
alysse

aww this poem is sweet and beautiful! it's so true...god gave me my little love 4 monthsa go and i wont let him go :) thanks for sharinf this wondrous poem ,and keep writing <333
-Mortalidaga
xxx
Take care

I thought this was a beautiful poem. It really made me think of my girlfriend, because I know that she is heaven sent. I thought the way that the poem flowed and the words you used were perfect. Great poem.

Awww thank you Mortalidaga 'n' Bryan for your comments. lolz im starting to change my mind 'bout this poem im starting to like it though i still think itz a bit rushed. im glad i could be of service lolz.

xxoo,
alysse

This was beautiful....sniff tear!
Great poem keep it up!
Much Luv Eirisa xoxo

Eirisa thanx! lolz was it that beautiful?

xxoo,
alysse

Thank you sooo much Cat! your comments mean alot and yeah..lolz

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alysse

Such a beautiful piece of writing, I love it so much... can't say I agree with the first part but that's my personal issue :S.... anyway, I love the way this poem rhymes and flows :) and well, I love the meaning of it :) keep it up girl :)

lolz no i dont totally agree with the first part myself but some people do. thanx 4 ur feedbak:o)