wow..brandon, this is another beautiful piece by you :) you have such tlaent and i hope you don't stop writing <33 thanks for sharing your poetry with us all <33
-Mortalidaga
keep writing & take care <3

that was a really cool poem!! thx for the comment on my poem....keep it up...
*Sw33ti3*

i love this poem, really really good. my favourite line is,
"i'll do you, but i'll never love you,
you'll never love me, but i don't care" cos it sounds just like me. great work.

WONDERFUL!!!!!!!! love it!!

...Wow...I really liked it...that was awesome...Keep it up...=P
~if you'd maybe would want check mine...lol..again that was a awesome poem!!!~

**LUV Sedusha**

Wow.....very powerful. Awesome job! ~dandy~