It seems there is alot of pain in sorrow deep within you. But it makes up for terrific poetry. I enjoy all of your writings. I just wish there was more light shined on your path. Take care.

misforturnate story. i like the way you ended this poem

Wonderful poem!! That was VERY strong and heartfelt!! You're such a talented writer!! This poem is written SOOO well.
Amy

This is a sad and very heart felt poem.
Keep up the good work

I have lost alot of friends to suicide over the years and i know how it feels when times of the year like what you have written about come around...it hurts and you have described that feeling so well - im sorry for your loss im sure your friend smiles on you from above :o) Much Luv Eirisa xoxo

Sad and beautiful poem Amy...I hadn't seen yours until just today..but I wrote one for my brother Randy on his birthday on August 16th just as you did here...look it up if you like..For Randy it's called..I feel for you..my brother would have been 46 this month and is greatly missed..what a waste of a life..take care, Michelle

beautiful poem well writtten i can also realte to how it is on bdays and every holiday or special occasion.I lost my bro to suicide nearly to yrs ago. he would have turned 15 in april so i know how hard itis.Im truly sry 4 ur lost.

Great poem , keep writting u have talent!!!!!

Awesome poem!

you're such a great writer!!