Awww what a sweet poem. Its so sad. I loved it.

Omg..Bryan, that poem is soooo sweet! You have such amazing talent!!! I swear! You put your heart and soul into your poetry and make it so amazing each time! Thanks so much for sharing your work with us :)
-Mortalidaga
-xoxox-

That was incredible. I..I'm speechless. Simply beautiful.

that was so beautiful... you captured the emotion perfectly... simply speechless... geesh.. keep it up... i can't wait to readm ore of your poems very soon... please read mine if ya ever get time.. i'm not sure if you'd like them though.. they're kinda sad and depressing, even though that's not the person I am... lol

take care,
much love,
danielle

That was an amazing poem.I'm sorry she's not wit u but that was so deep and she would be proud to have known and loved you. You have suchunique talent. Don't waste it! lots of love from katie xxxx

aww thats so cute I really liked it keep up your good work

I like this poem it was really different and i could relate, but also had that hidden element of saddness in the story rather than in the language - very creative nice work thanks for sharing and check out mine if you have a chance
Much Luv Eirisa xoxo

This was tragically sweet!! Your talent truly mesmerizes me!! Thanks for sharing your poetry!!!!

Wow that was amazing. Actually made me feel like crying. Very well written and heartbreaking.