That was very beautifully written. Good imagery and structure. I loved it alot, you described it all very well. I'm looking forward into reading more, keep it up! :)
xoxo

Brilliant!!!!! It is fantastic, i liked it lots and lots, it was short, sweet and oh so very very powerful, and to answer your question in the poem, yes, yes i have. very nice work!!!
Ben

awsome... i can relate to most of your poems they're really touching... keep writting i'm looking forward to reading more of your work..
Sarah

Very powerful and descriptive. You would make a great author.

Yes I have!! Very descriptive and full of emotion... I loved it.. 5/5

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