Nice rhymage (I make up words like that all the time :P). It's apparant that you felt this, very nice~

I don't know if i've already told you this but you are on my favourites and poems like that prove why, that was nothing short of amazing

I really liked that poem..right now..even though I'm eleven..it says exactly how I feel..I mean, exactly..which is weird..and kind of creepy..in a cool way =D I gave you a five

Wow that was really good, and emotional! This got a 5 from me! Thanks for the comment on my poem too! Keep up the great work!

Hey, this poem is really great. I emailed it to my friend from school right off this site and I added my own little message and it really made my friend realize what he had done to me. When I just read the email he had in reply it really made me feel good and there arent too many times anymore because of his girlfriend that I get emails like that from him. I told his girlfriend now to just go ask him out because I was tired of hearing him say oh my gosh I like Steph so much and I was tired of hearinf her say oh my gosh I love Gabby but I am so scared of asking him out and she asked why I told her to go ask him out and I said because I know he will say yes and then I wont hear about it anymore. Well after that it like ruinned mine and Gabbys friendship. I liked Gabby a lot at the time so it really hurt me. This poem was excelent and I happen to come across it at a good time. Nice work. Cant wait to read more. ~Sunshine~

You did a great job here in describing some strongly felt, conflicting emotions toward this person.

BTW, I really admire your artistry also, as in your profile picture.
Cheers, --Lydia