loved it, cant wait to read the ending now. im crying its so good.

OMG, I love this poem, its so AWESOME, sad but awesome . . It is so Gr8 .. it really touched me ! !
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I am in shock. This has got to be one of the best poems I have ever had the privelage of laying my eyes on. Extraordinary work.

oh my god this is withouy a doubt the best poem i have ever read the power and emotion in it is incredible.

Wow. That's so sad, and so touching. It was a really great ending... I'll be sure to read the next part.

beautiful..must read the next part..
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OMG... that was ... I'm crying so hard :-( I don't even know what to say. it was so scary, and so devastating... :'( Excellent poem! You write very very well.

That is such and excellent poem. I must go read the second part now because I cannot stand the suspense. Great work!!

That is awsome! The story is told sooo well and it makes u feel like its happening to u or someone u love! well written!!

OMG! that is so unbelievably good writing! NEVER STOP!

Amazing write. Unbelievable job on this. I am going to go read the next part right now :)
Take care.

Thats an excellent poem, keep writing. take kare x x x

This poem made me want to vomit. Little to well written. 5/5 i guess