hey, I thought it was a great poem!!! Really powerful, made me think!

I liked that one alot. Held alot of emotion. Great Job.

hey girl... shoot i liked this one =) lotsa emotion... elizabeth right =) it's powerful =)... thank u for sharing ur poem... i really liked it... hope u pass by mine sometimes =) i wrote new poems =) ciao darlin...

WoW!! Man how could you say sorry its not so good..but i agree it wasnt good..it was great!!! That was amazing!! I could picture everything that was happening and thats what i like..i wish i could give more then a five cause this deserves higher!! Great job! keep your head high!

such a beautiful poem with so much emotion depicted in it. that was amazing and excellent.
xnikkix

and as so many people have said, you should not be sorry, thankyou for sharing such a beautiful poem with us. great work.
xnikkix

Are you kidding? That was such a wonderful poem. Such power woven in the lines, I give it a five. The topic may be sad, but it's a really great peice. Nice job!

OMG how can u say htat was bad?! that was pure talent! you are amazing katie! i love yourt work sooo much you have incredible talent :( please keep writing <333
-Mortalidaga
xxxtakecarexxx

hey, i loved that poem, twas great. keep writing :) ...but whats with tha "sorry its not so good" ...why would you write that? you obviously want praise + reussurance and sh-t. anyway, good job
cya

WOW. Unbelievably good, just simply amazing, I loved the ending, I'm so speechless. Good job and keep it up :0)