awww...that's beauitful bryan...you're work is so heart felt and touching...but in a sad way...im sorry bout what u've been through and everything...you write such amazing poetry, you have pure talent...good to always hear from you..<333 luv you lots hun xoxox
-Mortalidaga
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I'm here for you if you ever need a listening friend...<33

That was a beautiful poem. I loved the emotion you must have put into it, it read smoothly and i love what you did with the last line. Touching write, well done.

Aww this is so sad. I'm sorry. But you wrote it very well. Good job! =)

~Grace

you are very talented bryan, your writing is amazing and means alot to me. i added you to my favorites bcuz you are a poetic god. i gave this a 5

Great poem, very emotional, keep it up

this poem is really good, when i was reading this poem i was feeling your pain and putting my relationship in your shoes........ all i can say is it touched me very good

omg i really liked that one! keep it up!

omg it made me cry i miss my friend named jacob i love him soo much i wish i could see him again!!!!:'(

You did an awsome job writing this poem! The emotion was there and I felt every ounce of it. Great job!!

*~BrittBratt~*