Comments : The Never Spoken Word

  • 19 years ago

    by Sherry Lynn

    Very good. I like it, I think we all know what it feels like when everything in us has to be buried, and yes it does tend to make one feel as though they are to be burried themselves.

    --Sher

  • 19 years ago

    by Sean Allen

    This poem reminds me of One Flew Over the Cukoo's Nest, but then again, everything does recently... I was just thinking about the hearing voices, and the sort of schizophrenic/MPD thing going on. The ending was as cool as it was original. Good work.

  • 19 years ago

    by TAinted vįŕťues

    That is exactly how i feel ....its beautiful...everythings burried n forgotten thats life

  • 19 years ago

    by Rebekah

    Wow really enjoyed reading this poem, it was very different and I especially liked the end!!!!!!!! well done
    regards
    bek
    xxxxxxxxxx
    Thanks for the comment on my poem

  • 19 years ago

    by *K~L~C*

    i loved the ending! cuz it lets us know more directly who u r! keep writin!

  • 19 years ago

    by vanessarrr

    no clue what it was going to be about from the title. excellent poem! very nice rhyming and really unique how you ended it. take care:)

  • 19 years ago

    by Dani Ward

    another sad, but excellent poem, you are so talented.

  • 19 years ago

    by *Elizabeth*

    OH WOW!! beautiful work!!! LOved the ending!!! it was great!! wow!

  • very clever... i like it alot... especially this stanza :

    My body has been broken
    My mind is all but dead
    Sometimes all I feel inside
    Are these voices in my head

    good job