Comments : A Tale From The Dark Side

  • 16 years ago

    by Jacki

    this remimends me of some of my poetry i've wrote. Same type of thing i was talking about a lenged creature who comes out to feast the jersey devil. Anyways i liked how you described everything. I like how you wrote he hunting for a victim, who will satisfy his thirst. Another life, so much like his wife.
    The one for which he was cursed.
    I loved those lines.
    THis poem was amazing!

  • 16 years ago

    by Amy

    I really liked the style you wrote this in and it was pretty intersting story. Great work

  • 16 years ago

    by Danielle

    sweet poem

  • 15 years ago

    by Emily

    OMG! I like that a lot!

  • 15 years ago

    by Feline Fatigue

    Ooo, scary! very good and immaginative! it sort of reminds me of a twilight zone I saw and Jeepers Kreepers2. i love it. 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Lauren Waszkiewicz

    Slightly creepy, its like a i dont know. i like hte da dun da dun da da da da da dun.. thats how i interpret the flow or w/e. i like how the 3rd line double rhymes, but it makes the poem less scary. but a wicked awesome tale and poem.