it sounds good and all but it's confusing!! explain it to me tomorrow!
and when did u come online??
i wanted to ask u bout that goofy comment of urs on sucidal tendecies

Good work. I loved the descriptions "Distorted faces of evil" and "Your golden voice" were my favorite. You put a lot of emotion into this poem, a lot of pain and fear of loosing someone you love. The vulnerability of the last two lines were powerful. A very touching poem, well done.

That was great ...juz keep it up!

I die in my dreams
I cry in my screams
thats my fav part.......
nice poem overall... :-)

hwy man very nice poem!!!! thanks a lot for commenting on my poem! i really appreciate it!!!!! and very nice poem!!!! i can feel your pain. i know it hurts. thanks again!

if only i could write like you...