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by Treasure Sep 1, 2004 category : Love, romance / lost love
Could someone tell me what went wrong to make you throw it all away What we had felt so strong but it seems you have gone astray Why can't you tell me what exactly you are thinking inside your head that is so jumbled perhaps it was your drinking That caused our love to crumble I still want to be with you more than ever I can't imagine us apart I'm willing to work through whatever to help us make a new start Can you please have mercy on my broken soul and let me have you for keeps Or was that the ultimate goal so you could have a place to sleep
by Krillin
I think this poem is really well written. Keep it up.