Very deep yet very well written poem. You have a lot of talent. Take Care! Brooke

there is a saying that Milton said and it was quoted in the movie seven. The world is good and it's worth fighting for. Well I just beleive in the ladder. Your a great writer keep up the good work...

outstanding poem 5/5 Ive never seen a format like this two rhymes in one line...awesome meaning and a great point...keep it up

Wow this is really deep i absolutly loved it....very different type of flow but thats what makes it great and unique 5/5