Hey, James, read my recent poem: "The Final Battle". It has more color. I generally like nice, simple, 3 or 4 stanza poems. I usually don't read a poem with 15 stanzas, unless the title or the 1st stanza or so catches my attention.

i have to disagree w/ lucifer said. I personally am into this sort of stuff, and personally i liked this poem alot. I think it was really good, but I also Liked the final battle better. This was like a great introduction into that one.

also just wanted to add that i gave you a 5/5 :)

Thanks Jacki. But to say its an introduction into the other? They don't have anything to do with each other.

nice work! i can almost see this battle!