that's beautifully writen, one of my favorites now,.. it reminded me of my first love actually, and how I didn't tell him because of my friends... then he moved to another state and I never saw him again, never got to say goodbye.. your poem almost made me cry remembering thinking what could have happened... keep up the writing, its great

that was an awesome poem. and thanks for the comment on mine.

very well written. very movig

and once again...im speachless

i cant give you enough praise for that one
great job!

That's awesome! You're very talented. As Kaitlyn said, it actually sorta reminded me of my first love. Only after he moved to somewhere did i find out he felt for me too.

That was a beautiful poem, keep it up! And thanks for commenting on mine, you're a doll.

xox, PorteR

Amazing. Its somehow comforting to read anothers pain, a pain I share with you...you've such an amazing way with words..ive read alot of ur poems..you're very good. This is a ver touching one

wow, that was amazing. you have such a talent with words. 5/5 just, great

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