Ahh very refreshing and inspiring..everyone must find that one true release in life....amazing write very enjoyable. Flow was perfect and I found myself visualing every step of your tale....pure poetic genius and a true treat to read! 5/5

Nicely written, with good descriptions and a lot of emotions.
I like the imagery that you created, it is very vivid.
The rhyming is good in whole piece.

Unusual title will draw in people, nice poem to go with the nice title xxx alex xxx

"No stuffy offices or political brown nosed twit,"

^^ HAHAHA. Oh, that cracked me up.

I love this, I thought it was beautifully written.

Flow, imagery, concept and content all came together to create a beautiful read.

Wonderfully written.

Loved this poem =]..

the flow was good..the rhyming was great and nothing seemed forced... the imagery was excellent.. nice work. 5/5

To me that sounds like a bikers creed and i loved it- raindrops 5/5

Haha, are you a biker?
Not my thing.
Make sure you wear a helmet so in case you get in an accident you don't damage that mind.
If it did, you may not be able to make poems such as this anymore.

It's needless to say, but I did like it.