This poem isn't true by the way, it's just a poem guys! I guess it's how I want the first to be.

Wow... great job. Expressed a lot of passion, I hope you get your wish! Great poem!

That's REALLY good!

omg girl hell no i first read like the first few senteces and i was like oh shet there talking about sex and i read on and on and dam girl that was the koolest poem i rever read i mean like it was powerfull lol love ya brit