What a wonderful poem! Your a very good writer. keep it up! ~dandy~

Great poem!! Its filled with such emotion...

OmG!!!! that poem is so good!!!

yeah, one of distant friends told me how she wasn't going to give up even though her parents disowned her and kicked her out of the house with nothing at all. and all the people who hung out with her can't anymore b/c of their parents and the rumours going around at school about her. she has been going through so much lately. and the guy that raped her that night at the party hasn't even been seen. he just disappeared. a few weeks ago she found out she was going to have a baby boy and she didnt want to lose him just b/c of what happened. i consider her my role model b/c out of all the things she has been through, she still is holding on and is determined to get her life back and prove to everyone she can. this poem is dedicated to her and i hope she wins this battle!!!!!!

I love this poem. so many young girls are going throught the same thing. I love your poems so keep it up!

I like it its an awesome poem

that is really good.
it made my stomach turn. (in a good way)

wow, thats so sad...and very inspirational...GREAT job...5

Very well done I really enjoyed that it showed the sadness but the thought odf I am not going to be a victem that was well done you should be proud. Take a look at nine months for me and tell me what you think well good job keep up the good work.

nice poem, im sory you feel that way, it'll be better

you are awesome! i really love your writings...but i know you dont know me and i dont know you but my e-mail is juggalette_1o1@yahoo.com if you wanna talk.(^thats an lowercase 'o')

vulnerable-endearing-don't lose
control...

this poems really good n seeing it through the eyes of someone else is really a hard thing to do but uve expressd it well. ive read a few of ur poems since u comented on mine n theyre realy good well dun! gud luk 4 tha future xXx

she is honorable for keeping that boy...may God bless her...and yes a great poem

i hope this isnt about you, i hope its about a friend, but i like it

awww! very good job! =)

hey look you are very pretty and i would hate to see someone like you to ruin your life iver something stupid so be strong hang in there and iff ya ever need anyting just aim me sexycute1209 or email me at brownshuga1209@yahoo.com