Comments : I Cant

  • 19 years ago

    by Leah20

    Nice job! I'm sorry about your ex, some guys have no sense at all.

  • 19 years ago

    by Mephastophilis

    This is great, excellent. its like a love/hate thing, its really good and unique. your very talented, especially for your age. xmollyxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Kristin

    This was a great poem! I love it a lot! Keep writing!

  • 19 years ago

    by nikki

    brilliant piece of work! you did an amazing job of this poem. i really liked it a lot.
    xnikkix

  • 19 years ago

    by vanessarrr

    very cute, nice poem. i liked the structure and the repeating words/lines. i enjoyed reading it. take care:)

  • 19 years ago

    by LostInLife!

    hey that was great, you really good,
    keep writing
    jemma xxx

  • Awesome, I saw your discussion post, and I'm glad I read this one. Great rhyme, and you concluded it very well. The not being able to forget the good, and the bad. Excellent work, keep it up.

  • 19 years ago

    by ChildofGod87

    :DWow.. I really liked this one:) Keep on writing and Great Job on this wonderful piece...Take Care..*5/5*
    *God Bless*

    **~**Sedusha**~**

  • 19 years ago

    by highschoolgirl

    niCe worK eh@loVe iT^