I was surprised that no one had comented or voted on this yet. The descriptions were very vivid and interesting. Good choice of words.

different but I liked it. good work 5/5

" I make stones of my guest" it should be plural form...as in "guests"
~Hina

Ps. Another Masterpiece. Ah, there are people like us in the world :)

"Scored my peers and hated by the rest,"
I don't really understand this, did you mean to say "scorned by" or did the deeper meaning just go right over my head? Also "I guess it's all in vane."
I assume you mean vain? The last line is also a bit strange, it rhymes, but "forsake" just doesn't work grammatically. Anyway, there's my ignorance out of the way. I enjoyed this alot, and I applaud you for it. Very well done.

I thought that this was okay, very original, nice rhyme scheme. Although the there wasn't much flow to the poem in some places you still did a nice job. Keep writing!

Hey this was a good poem! It was very strong and i understood what you meant well. Ok i'll read your other two now :)

I like it, though I dont really think that the rhyming does it just. 4/5.

original,good poem,confusing but after a second read i kinda get it.

hey...it was good...well written
//.:amanda:.\\

i like it, though there were a few spelling mistakes and a line that didnt quite make sense
Scored my peers and hated by the rest,
at least to me it didnt makes sense. i dunno haha. its a pretty good poem though.
~Freak~

Nice job beautiful writing

Great poem! 5.0 ♥

Great poem! 5.0 ♥