Comments : Deep Sleep

  • 19 years ago

    by Ashmore

    wow!! What a great piece of writing you got yourself here hun! It's such a sad poem! It reminds me of myself really. You wrote this perfectly, I could actually see this happening! Great work! Keep writing! By the way, thank you for the comment on my poem, much appreciated =)

    Take care, Jessica xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashley Redden

    good job...keep writin..ever git the chance check out sum my poems

  • 16 years ago

    by Always and Never

    That was very good. Kepp up the good work, if you can check mine out and vote and comment them. thanks

  • 16 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    Words can't describe the depth and flow you bring here! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSuicidalxx

    Wow, beautiful poem! It is so sad and heartfelt....sucj depth and it is a joy to read...

  • 15 years ago

    by Shokry Al Qubati

    "a kiss can tell... I know the whole story"
    this part is what i like most.. Keep it up 5/5
    regards,
    Shokry

  • 15 years ago

    by Solus

    I often wonder if love's light can overcome the dark sorrow....for there are always shadows on the brightest days.....