That was gre8! With poems like that no one in america can forget...gave it a 5! Bravo!!

Sarah

This is a wonderful September 11th poem. I love it.

wow! excellent imagery!love it:)

Good work. I was seriously wondering what your poem was going to be about with the title and category. But i understand now. From what i understood the horrible birds represented humans cutting down the tree as so destroying lots of innocent animals homes. Just if my interpretation is incorrect, i really don't know how birds can knock trees down. I thought it was a very nicely written and well thought out poem.
I did spot a typo when reading though. This line " Becasue they cause too much", you spelt "because" wrongly.
Great work, i enjoyed this poem.

Ohh right now that makes more sense. I've read the previous comments. I didn't know it was September 11 poem. But birds and trees make much more symbolic sense with this. So forget the thing i said before about animals n trees.

I really liked this one. Keep it up and take care!

~Grace

great work keep them coming

abby xxxx

That was great!!! I love the way you worded it...it put it into a whole different view. Keep it up.
~*~Christina~*~

awesome poem! i loved it! keep in touch!
lexi lou

*Speechless by the imagery and awesome work*

I think the message is nice and relevant to the world today. However, when you get to this line "This world is out of hand", all the lines following fall out of place. It's like you just suddenly lost the rhythm of the poem. It's still nice though, good work.

wow great poem loved it!

amazing poem, i loved it, keep it up xxxx

A very good poem indeed.

One question: does the following line refer to the terrorists or the people?

"Banning together they fight
And they win"

\5/

People

Good, but it didn't seem to have the same flow and feeling as the others of yours I've read.