this poem is not bad. nothing you write is ever bad when you are expressing yourself! always remember that!

I'm extremely sorry for your loss. And your poem was not bad at all ... it was heart felt and real. It held real emotions, real pain, and real words. There is nothing to be ashamed of ... God bless.

I'm really sorry for what happened, I really am :'( The poem had so much emotions in it....Great work.
xxx