Yes I know I have been pretty silent in the poetry department, but I hope everyone will at least give this poem a chance. Thanks in Advance to everyone who votes/comments.

Good job, David. I love reading your poetry. You are a good poet, keep up the good work. And I am sorry about the girl...She doesn't know what she's gonna miss out on. You are a great guy.

Your friend,
Ashley

thats so sad it makes me think of what happened to me i said i would say i do someday then he went away but he came back and im keeping him

Wonderful poem!!! I feel that EXACT way! Wonderful job!!

Amy

I love the repetition of "the memory" and the consistent rhyme scheme. Those 2 techniques together make it easy to read and adds impact to your message. Great job :)

wow, that is exactly how i feel about someone that means everything to me. i'm going to send her this, giving you credit of course. keep writing, and check out my poems and comment please.

wow...i can relate to that so well that its not even funny. great job, loved it alot. 5/5

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what a great poem. I can relate oh too well. =)

Thats an awful experience....I hope that you're okay! I know that loving someone even after they've left is an incredible pain! I do hope that you are okay David! I can't imagine being in you place, not again...5/5 though on an incredible poem...

Ppwerful write ... completely heartfelt. I've marked you so that I can go back and read more of your works.

Powerful, not ppwerful ... can't spell tonight!

Wow that was a great poem