beatuiful words u have a lot of talent

HEY THIS IS A REALLY GREAT POEM ................Vald he means in love he fell like he fell in love!!! sometimes you doesnt stand tall when you fall in love sometimes its hard!
anyways good job!
---you kno how I Do----
Amanda

beautiful somewhat like Rumi you had me thinkig of a lover

Loved it! =) Keep it up!

Enjoyed, keep up the good work.