i like this kinda of poem, the one that deals with liking your friend more than just a friend. it reminds me when i did. but of course it all went wrong. and his girlfriend that was controlling him was my so-called best friend. and now we never talk and he's still going out with her and everyday when i see him with his girl i notice how different he looks. but i do love your poem. it is written very good and the pattern of it just seems to flow.