OH....MY....GOD!!!! WHoa that was...I dont even know...I'm in shock!!! I honostley do not know what to say..this poem was just amazing!! My mouth is just dropped open..I got to e-mail you big sis about this one...I'm stunned!! GREAT..and I mean GREAT Job with this..It was amazing!!

Thankyou sweety - ill wait for that email hun! Your feedback is always so welcome and valued!

Eirisa, This was absolutely beautiful. I'm the mother of two boys grown now, Have a granddaughter 7, and a grandson 3. There is nothing no more precious than the love of your children and grandchildren. I thank God for them each and every day. Keep up the good work, I enjoy your poems so much.

Thankyou Meena and Ann i look forward to reading your poetry and returning the favour to you both...

Wow. You must have been so frightened being pregnant at a fairly young age. You seem like such a strong person and u show that through your amazing poetry.

Thankyou sooooo much Donna - your words touched me so much! Im going to email you!

excellent

Thanks Britney your kind words are too nice! Im so flattered from your comments i will thankyou personallY!

I think this is a very good poem....people are sometimes to busy to see what they really have.

this is so sweet, i loved it!

Thanks to you both Heather and Molly Ill have toc heck out more or your poems

This is a very touching poem, nice work