ozzy would be proud .. f..king gr8 stuff

i liiked it. especailly stanza 8. well writen. i love your vocabulary and it seems to me that your poems tend to have some sort of religous/occult influence. consistant and unique.

another great poem, keep writtin, ur and awsome writer

that has to be ones of the best poems i've read hun, really good. you use so many words that other wouldn't of thought of using instead of the basic ryming scheme. well done, 5/5

Wow, awesome and amazing. the way you have chosen your words reflects a great talent within you. Like a vulcano ready to erupt and show it's beauty. Keep on writing like that