A very interesting piece. I loved the flow and the description's you used were awesome...Great job!

WOW...i liked this poem..never read anything quite like it..very good!! Its the kind of poem that can be interperated in many different ways to different people..very awesome..alot of talent u have!!
much love
elizabeth

This is a really interesting poem but it was really good. Keep up the great work and thanks for commenting on my poem. Luv Nicole =)

Interesting! This poem seems to be about the thrill of being bad. Am I correct?

I agree with HOLLY. Nice work. <3333

Nice. Deep. I feel there were lots of undercureents of things unsaid. I enjoyed this.

Paul, love this. I love how your relate to holding pain by wearing the devils coat, at times it does feel like that doesn't it. The imagery here is excellent.

Rhythm, beat and wording all fit perfectly.

Em

Paul, love this. I love how your relate to holding pain by wearing the devils coat, at times it does feel like that doesn't it. The imagery here is excellent.

Rhythm, beat and wording all fit perfectly.

Em