also you can read the other version that shadowmaker and I did, its under his profile......Hope you enjoy both versions!!

#Jacki#
I think that it was "Awesome"...you have some talent...I liked your poem...Keep it up...*5/5* Best of Luck to your upcoming poems!!! ~Take care~
Chau gurl...

**xxxxSedushaxxxx**

really deap stuff

Wow... I loved it.