wow..so dark and murderous like...lol..very good my dear..Love ya, Tim

whoa... that was TOO good...remind me not to make you mad!!! ;)

No really, that was VERY well written...and 5 minutes!?!? WOW!

I think I would have nightmares if I tried to write something like this...I always try to feel what I'm writing even if it's purely fictional...

wow...really good poem!

Ummm this poem was amazing! Like the stoyrline you used was so very unique and the descriptions and rhythm flowed soooo well together! You did an wonderful five minute job - damn im jealous i wish it would take me five mins to write something this spectacular!!! Good on you hayley this is one of my faves i have ever read on this site!!!

Perhaps it is whack ... but it's good, and I like it!!

a little creepy *scooches away*
but reel good *scooches ferther away*

Creepy...remind me not to become good friends with you! AHH! lol j/k great job!