I think its great the ''Layers'' to me describe peoples lies and false emotions. It is an excellent poem :)

very good poem!!!

very good, I can relate to this.

Wonderful! Absolutley WONDERFUL! that was a great poem, ^-^ I feel the same too, i can really relate to this.

hey...amazing poem, i can really relate to the layers thing. awesome that you can put that emotion into words. yet very sad.also i really really liked the repitition of the first verse, it rounded it off perfectly.
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