Agree wth benjamin

God bless u

This is so sad. I know when you lose the one you love. The way you see the world changes. It no longer seems as bright. It becomes dark and lonely. Excellent job on your poem. Take Care Cindy

Good poem. i understand completely. for i been hurt so many times but i still go back.

Wow this is really good and i can relate to it a lot! you did such a great job on it. it flowed very nicely. 5/5

~Kristina

Ah I loved this one! It's great to see a someone write this way about love and about how it can't just be moved on from. Finally someone that gets it! The poem is deep, the lack of rhyming doesn't damage it at all and I noticed the first stanza sums up what the poem will be about. :)

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And again the stanzas are kind of weird. but i like it, once i read the first stanza i had to finish reading... it really was a good poem.... 5/5

Hmm...great structure and i love the message, i feel ur so sincere for love! and the girl was so lucky. great expressing ur feelings to someone.

Great piece with overflowing emotions and true love. superb 5/5

It speaks true pain of love....wonderful!

It was kinda long but it kept my attention from start to end, well done. It flowed nicely, I like your choice of words.

Leaves changed from green to gold
The sky from blue to grey,
All people changed
Places changed and times keep changing too.
And you may also change
But thinking why I still like you.
^^I really like that stanza

But my favorite line would be..
In your eyes I found the light to light my way
^^That line is really powerful.

5/5 keep up the good work!

Good poem... altho the transition of all your poems are a little iffy there still great

id give u a 4/5

This poem is even better than your poem called:"Will I always love you" Some lines of this piece really impressed me. Imagery is great. 5/5

Great poem very well writen

Good poem, good feelings, achieving extra pleasure. all and all your writing is superb. Just go ahead with your next poem to enable us to read, vote and to comment therein with a great happiness.....

Nazeer

Hey! allow me to comment again in this lovely poem of yours- u know what- this 1 correlates with my own exerience of which is something thats is still there- i have thats question why i still going back to my x-love while i knew precisely thats she broke my heart- what worried me the most is i thought I'm the only one who ever be in thats situation- today u've reveal my feelings and thank u for finding my secret and all thats- your poem is nicely expressed and its had give me the question too- will i also always love her- maybe- great poem.

Excellent can i grade it a 10...

This is so sweet, i understandhow ur feelin to i was like thiss about a guy named dustin:"(