Comments : A Fallen Angel

  • 19 years ago

    by The Plain Truth

    Her halo is broken along with her heart
    Her once white robes are stained and shredded apart
    Her beautiful face is now streaked with tears
    Can you believe she's felt like this for years?
    She's watched her once glorious life go down the drain
    Now all she's got left is the pain
    When it rains, do you hear her cries?
    Can you feel the hurt and pain fall from the skies??
    She once was so happy never once doubting her life
    But now it's too often she talks only to a knife

    Excellent wording. Keep it up girl, stay strong.

    Megan §

  • 19 years ago

    by Honey Kisses 18

    thank you...

  • kayla
    i love it, it was a wonderful poem.