I hope this isn't a true poem??? It was really sad and it touched my heart.... I hope you don't really go through this pain.....Great poem, I love it!!!

its sad. I liked it. good job. 5/5

-no more

wow, that was great. i can tell you dont really like mine, but i like your poems a lot.

Hey, this is a great pome as well... 5/5 Keep it up!

Please read and comment on some of my poems as well

~ Tina

great poem..... sorry if its true or if it happened to any1 you know!!! stay strong!!! i relly loved your poem....x)

yay it let me add my comment!!!

Dang your good at writing

Wow. This is very nicely written. So sorry if this is based around a true event. *hug* 5/5
xo

Hmm...
Seems like most of your poems have the same rhyme scheme. Why not write them in a different way? For example do something like abcbc or something random like that, instead of abab. That would be great! You have a lot of talent and i enjoy your poems, this one was good too! Keep writing,
Satuxxa

OH MY...i pray that didnt happen...if it did i am so very sorry.
However, i do see the pattern in your poems such as who they are written for. I really enjoyed the poem you did a beautiful job writing it.
take care always
Scooby

I like this poem a lot more than the others. I flows well and has a good subject. Well done. Though I do find that some of the rhyming in your poems feels forced.

Tiff