aww hun of course ur not crazy ur just like the rest of us. . a bit unique .. dont ever think ur weird cos ya not.. anyways gr8 poem ur v. talented and i can totally relate to this. g2g luv yaxx

spooky-saw a real ghost? gave me
the shivers!

We see what we want to see....reality may just be sumone else's imagination or an illusion beyond imagination....be happy you are different at least u aint "ordinary"....
great poem....

Excellent poem very dark very brilliant

Hey we're all a little crazy its a good thing :)

very good poem!

wow, very cool and spooky, oh it great, can't wait till more of them to come :) Keep up the good work :)

That was pretty awesome. I really enjoyed it, can't wait for the rest. Feel free to read my work anytine. Take care and be safe

~Richard~
aka- Murasame

Ohh creepy, i really liked this. What struck me first of all was the excellent rhyme flow and meter, it worked perfectly. Your wording and descriptions created the spooky image you were looking for. In my eyes a very nicely written and well thought out poem. I can't wait to read part two. Keep up the good work.

WOW!!! this is an EXCELLENT POEM!! i'm gonna go read part 2 now!! ha ha luv inna

boa, great and with that really good style, yezz and you're just 13 , don't loose that dark path, pleaze ;)

excellent poem, i felt it, you are on my favorites. very good work, keep it up

Oooo, ghostie story! My favorite ^_^. Sorry I havent been on for a while to check your poetry. I'm well, how about yourself? Anyway, I think I'm going to like this little series. I have a neat little picture in my head of all this happening. Take care~

--Bryce~

"And bared her bloody piercing gaze" i really like that line. ill be honest, the first two stances were weak, but i really liked the imagery on the last stance, good job

OOHH i really liked this, I seen you had a ghost series as do I so I had to read it. I'm all about these type of poems lol. Anyways I love how you made it rhyme i usually write free verse so this was really nice to read something on a simiular note but different. I liked the style of it and I loved the descriptions of the lighning hitting her face. Can't wait to go onto the next one :)