I'm glad everyone's like the first two, so here's the dramatic trilogy! Haha. Enjoy!

That.... was hot...
lol
Aken Sol

lol..God, that's hawt and funny.

lmao. you're poems rock XD you're absolutly amazing :*)
-Mort
xxTakeCarexx

lmao...just as good as the others!

HA HA HA I love the entire trilogy every single one - whatta talent you have! They all made me laugh and we're all really well written...
A pleasure to read as always
Thanks for sharing....Eirisa xxoo

This unfortunate event luckily did not actually happen to me....thank God!

LMAO!! Oh my goodness you got an amazing talent for this not happening to you..I mean damn..you had me in tears by the end of this from laughing so hard..I rate fives for great poems like these!! Great Job!

haha loving the twist!! its awesome!

Yeh "thank God" is right, man those three times....if anyone has those three times im sorry for them. great one tho laughed VERY hard

i laughed so damn hard. oh tears streaming down. this was so funny. the triology, it was so great. oh gosh, favorites you are on..... lol that was funny

Dude, you are an awsome writer. i don't think i have ever laughed so hard.

Dude, you are an awsome writer. i don't think i have ever laughed so hard.

these poem are just too funny!! i LOVE EM!! LOL!! KEEP IT UP!! :)

All three of your poems were wonderfully funny
i loved them all but this one ended the best

Hee hee, good ending! loved it 5/5

Bagel? bagel? 5/5 kwl poem

HA HA FUNNY!!!!!!!!!!!

Mann u just cant catch a break huh? lolz ur so talented!