you had me almost in tears, this story felt like it was about me, except that i'm quite obviously not dead, but i feel like i should be everyday, and i wish someone would truly care. excellent job on the poem. i hope you do not have to go through this too.
xnikkix

lie nmikki said this story is very true

fortinatly for me, i know nothing of the pain. You are an awesome poet, i had chills up and down my spine while reading this, and i don't usually have a reaction like that. it was very very good, nice job.
Ben

woah!!

wow amazing keep up the good work!i hope we can keep in touch!
lexi lou

Wow this poem was spectacular! I loved it! keep it up and take care!

~Grace

that one was good too! I'm from kansas and i'm 15 too!! just thought i'd tell you we have something in common. O and i give this one a *5*!

I loved it... So innocent and true. One of my favourties automatically.
-Whispre