So powerful, u almost had me in tears, and i dont cry much, a wonderful job, i know the feeling so i can relate to it.best of luck in the future.
Ben

aaaaaaaah yikes!! loved it:)

Wow, a very emotional poem. I loved the way you worded everything, and it was just so good! =) Keep it up and take care!

~Grace

very powerful and full of vivid imagery...i can totally relate to what you're going through, and i think you expressed yourself beautifully through this poem...awesome job

very real poem tells it like it is! i like the words you used and the way you presented it!