Comments : Adam's Rib

  • 14 years ago

    by Katrina Boblina

    i like this good job. really its great!! 5/5! keep writing.

  • 14 years ago

    by Katrina Boblina

    oops lol sorry for putting that so many times, my computer messed up:)

  • 14 years ago

    by Andrea

    oh wow! i loved this poem. awesome job

  • 14 years ago

    by XxXangeltearsXxX

    wow 5/5 love it love it love it! i really like your work! its so clever! i love the last lines, they are so true. thanks again for commenting on my poem!

  • 14 years ago

    by Gerard Kurt

    Thats a very well written conversion of the word of God to poetry. Well-done. This one deserves a 5.

  • 14 years ago

    by midnight♥lullibys

    This is excellent i like how it's not about you know depression and sadness....its a good change for this site....very good flow and excellent choice of words 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Shawn Williams

    Terrific ending...and I love the references. Well written and solid throughout

  • 14 years ago

    by Sarah White

    This is cleverly written. Turning a story (please no one take offence by me calling it this :p) into a poem without losing its meaning. And the twist at the end is very true. Really enjoyed reading it.
    Sarah

  • 14 years ago

    by Renee

    Awesome poem. definitley a good concept and message. I love the flow, and the last line ties it all together. Great job

    Take Care,
    Renee

  • 14 years ago

    by Andrea

    Wow. you know what....i so just read that part in the Bible today. wow. thats awesome.
    great poem tho. the rhyming was just perfect and..yes good job.

  • 14 years ago

    by Jamie

    Wow this was really good im not religious and i still got the message this poem sent out great work

  • 14 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    Ohmygoodness. This poem is so beautiful, and so true. Awh, I really love this poem, it's the best I have read in ages that actually made really good sense to me.

  • 14 years ago

    by aaron c s

    Damn! i dotn even know what to say. that left me breathless! that is now one of my favorite poems ever! good job

  • 14 years ago

    by Amanda

    Interesting, insiring piece. Like i've always said to you before when i've read your work - You have a different style to what i would normally read and it's good because i learn from it. This poem is brilliant and keep it up!

  • 14 years ago

    by allison

    So awsome, i loved it. Puts the truth right in your face.

  • 13 years ago

    by Loulou

    Such a wonderful poem i love this
    thank you for all your comments and i hope to read more from you

    tabby

  • 13 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    Beautifully penned.
    there is a lot to think back on this.

    good luck
    shobhana

  • 13 years ago

    by *Unbreakable Soul*

    Wow Michael excellent poem
    5/5
    amile :)

  • 13 years ago

    by StMario

    You are a bad man with a pen!

  • 13 years ago

    by Luke

    Thanks for the comments man, they meant a lot. i like this piece, it sounds so professional, its smooth and masterfully written, it follows a clear storyline, and most importantly, it has a meaning!! nice message at the end, great piece.