i like this good job. really its great!! 5/5! keep writing.

oops lol sorry for putting that so many times, my computer messed up:)

oh wow! i loved this poem. awesome job

wow 5/5 love it love it love it! i really like your work! its so clever! i love the last lines, they are so true. thanks again for commenting on my poem!

Thats a very well written conversion of the word of God to poetry. Well-done. This one deserves a 5.

This is excellent i like how it's not about you know depression and sadness....its a good change for this site....very good flow and excellent choice of words 5/5

Terrific ending...and I love the references. Well written and solid throughout

This is cleverly written. Turning a story (please no one take offence by me calling it this :p) into a poem without losing its meaning. And the twist at the end is very true. Really enjoyed reading it.
Sarah

Awesome poem. definitley a good concept and message. I love the flow, and the last line ties it all together. Great job

Take Care,
Renee

Wow. you know what....i so just read that part in the Bible today. wow. thats awesome.
great poem tho. the rhyming was just perfect and..yes good job.

Wow this was really good im not religious and i still got the message this poem sent out great work

Ohmygoodness. This poem is so beautiful, and so true. Awh, I really love this poem, it's the best I have read in ages that actually made really good sense to me.

Damn! i dotn even know what to say. that left me breathless! that is now one of my favorite poems ever! good job

Interesting, insiring piece. Like i've always said to you before when i've read your work - You have a different style to what i would normally read and it's good because i learn from it. This poem is brilliant and keep it up!

So awsome, i loved it. Puts the truth right in your face.

Such a wonderful poem i love this
thank you for all your comments and i hope to read more from you

tabby

Beautifully penned.
there is a lot to think back on this.

good luck
shobhana

Wow Michael excellent poem
5/5
amile :)

You are a bad man with a pen!

Thanks for the comments man, they meant a lot. i like this piece, it sounds so professional, its smooth and masterfully written, it follows a clear storyline, and most importantly, it has a meaning!! nice message at the end, great piece.