This is cleverly written. Turning a story (please no one take offence by me calling it this :p) into a poem without losing its meaning. And the twist at the end is very true. Really enjoyed reading it.
Interesting, insiring piece. Like i've always said to you before when i've read your work - You have a different style to what i would normally read and it's good because i learn from it. This poem is brilliant and keep it up!
Thanks for the comments man, they meant a lot. i like this piece, it sounds so professional, its smooth and masterfully written, it follows a clear storyline, and most importantly, it has a meaning!! nice message at the end, great piece.