That poem is just amazing

Phenominal. I have no other words for this.

Nice conclusion at the end! Good work.

Excellent poem.one of my favs.will read more of urs.

Wonderful message. All is true. Beautiful start. Flawless finish.

5/5

A very inspiring and superbly penned piece.It tells an important story of God's creation of man and woman.
An enjoyable read.
Paul...

Beautifully written and executed, this poem tells an old tale and leaves the reader with something to ponder.
Well done

Grant

I just had to favorite it 5/5 :)

This poem seems unfinished; it stopped so abruptly. I was enjoying the ride and then it was as if you lost your message.

Awesome ! an excellent poem
5/5
Abeera

A story of Adam and eve - something different! i really like how you used the story of Adam and Eve to send out a message through your poem.

"But one of the things would remain the same
Most will look to their side to cast the blame"
- how true is this! I loved these two lines

No i take that back this is my favorite poem so far! i love the 1st and 2nd stanza 5.5

Aha!

a bit o' cosmic humor, eh?
good show...'~)

and, thanks for your kind response to 'mid-September'..

I love this piece, so many time we take for granted the real reasons for toiling,....original sin!!!! great job, well penned

Very good, im not a religous person but it goes much deeper and I can relate

This is a poem I thought I'd never read but wonderful all the same. Deep