hmm ...u write really well 4 ur age:)and i loved the stars..keep writing:)

oh WOW..omg marta!!! wow..I can't even tell you how amazing i thought this was!!!! As i was reading it my heart was beating so fast because it was SOOO powerful!!! I loved it!!! great job like usual!!!!!!
much love
elizabeth

Well that scared the crap out of me actually. I thought the first few stanzas didn't flow very well, so you might want to read through them outloud and see if you can get them to sound better (eg no "like" in the last line of stanza #1). I liked the poem however, particularly the ending.